BrokenPaperWings's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spare Dethtime (t2)]

Great, but...

It had great sound to it, and I gave it a 5 but it didn't have bass unless you really didn't want to put bass in there. Is this a real song? If it is, then it kind of lacks structure, I think you're a musician so you should know.

5/5 Because it had some great licks and riffs in there :)
8/10

fizzypop2 responds:

I was thinking of adding bass. But I was just legitimately lazy and haven't ever played around with how to record bass properly. I figured now wasn't the time.

At first it was a quick write+record because we just wanted something to do. Then of course, I redid the guitar.

If we wanted to make it into a serious real song, it would probably be longer and have some vocals. I believe that at that point, it'd be stage-worthy. But this was just for fun. It has potential to become something we can use in the future, though.

Thanks for the review!

[+- The One -+]

Quite Amazing :D

Wow, you really nailed it on this one. This is a good hyped up techno beat and you utilized strings into it or at least I think. Might have not have been strings, but I loved it. It had great sound to it.

5/5
10/10 Downloaded! :)

[Into Deep Blue - DubAudio]

I like this one

This is a change from the traditional DubStep I keep hearing these days, I like this one. It's a change from the norm. You did a really good job on utilizing DubStep into your ambient track, congratulations lol. Not good enough for me to download, however :(
Keep up the good work nonetheless.

What it lacked: A sort of pathway for the listener to walk on when he or she is listening to it, it was going somewhere and didn't reach a climax where I expected it to be. Structural problem.

What it had: Great feel to it, good beat and an overall good sound to it.

10/10
5/5

[Boogie Remix]

LOL

Sounds like it's from Tokyo Extreme Racer, a great game. GOOD WORK!

SHADOWFOX2 responds:

Never played that game before but glad you like

[Odd Dreams]

sounds really good

Yeah I like this, the beat is sick

Guffawer responds:

Thanks babe. The feedback is appreciated.

[A Pirates Fluffy Tail]

Wonderful

although I could not listen to this more than once, it is simply too much cheese.

ItsTheAshtray responds:

a-HAHA
This is AMERICA! THE MORE CHEESE, THE BETTER!!!

[Organ Terror (Rit)]

herm..

It has a good concept but it lacks something. I think that the staccato notes of the organ are quite annoying, and it doesn't have a direct feel to the music. You should add a bass organ that plays some notes that are part of the main riff. Although it is a good direction, it just does not have enough legato notes, making the song seem skippy and just not well put together.

Ritenuto responds:

hmmm....i'l look into it. i'm not sure i feel the same way....but i think i can see your point.

Thank you for actually taking the time to write a review though! Thats what i'm here for.

~Rit

[-Dancing Flame-]

Quite

This is absolutely beautiful. Thank you for blessing my ears with this gorgeous piece of art. I haven't heard anything quite as magnificent since my first visit to Newgrounds, which was quite a long time ago.

Step responds:

Wow, didn't expect such a supportive review xP. Thanks!

Glad you enjoyed it!